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解析雅思写作用词五大注意点,助力雅思6分高分读名校

2017-12-06 18:49:48作者:阅读量:

  雅思写作取得高分的关键在于灵活地运用词汇,多使用非常用词汇,分数一般来说不会低于5.5分。因此,在日常学习中,如何区别低分词汇和高分词汇是关键所在。武汉文都留学雅思培训老师认为,中国考生一般来说可以比较正确的表达出自己的观点,但是对于词汇和句式的使用就有些茫然了,经常会重复使用词汇,句式也只会用简单句。
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  对于参加雅思考试的同学来说,雅思写作是其中比较难得一部分,那么雅思写作用词方面有什么讲究呢?
  
  雅思写作用词注意要点一:使用具体的动词
  
  比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,分数当然能提高啦!
  
  例如:
  
  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.
  
  Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
  
  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.
  
  Better:She compares prices and quality.
  
  雅思写作用词注意要点二:表语转化为不同的修饰语
  
  很多烤鸭不明白什么时候用主动,什么被动!用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!这样做,也是因为这个原因!
  
  例如:
  
  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.
  
  Better:Charity has supported the organization.
  
  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
  
  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
  
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  雅思写作用词注意要点三:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词
  
  1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语
  
  例如:
  
  1) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.
  
  Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.
  
  2) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.
  
  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.
  
  2、表语转换为不同的修饰语
  
  例如:
  
  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
  
  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
  
  Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
  
  3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词
  
  例如:
  
  1) Weak:The team members are good players.
  
  Revision:The team members play well.
  
  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
  
  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
  
  雅思写作用词注意要点四:不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语
  
  写作不是用的词汇越高深就越高分,想提高成绩就要用词简单、生动。
  
  例如:
  
  1、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
  
  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
  
  2、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
  
  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
  
  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
  
  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
  
  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
  
  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
  
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  雅思写作用词注意要点五:避免陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语
  
  雅思是一门语言考试,主要考察烤鸭们的语言运用能力,而写作关键点就在文章的表现力上!
  
  例如:
  
  1、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
  
  Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
  
  2、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
  
  Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

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