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  2016年7月雅思写作范文新鲜出炉啦!建议近期参加考试的同学收藏起来,用作参考,以更加好的备考哦。
 
  2016年07月9日雅思写作第一时间解析+范文
 
  大作文原题目:
 
  There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
 
  话题类型:观点类,双边讨论;广告类话题
 
  题目译文:有很多针对儿童的广告,比如零食、玩具和其它商品。父母认为孩子们比较受广告影响,从而产生一定压力;广告商则认为广告本身能够提供大量有用信息。讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。
 
  分析:今年广告类话题已经考第二次了,在今年2月20日就考了关于针对儿童的广告是否应该被禁止,因此对广大烤鸭来说应该是比较熟悉的话题了。这个题目有一定难度。
 
  文章结构:
 
  四段式结构
 
  第1段:介绍话题内容;
 
  第2段:论证段第1段,指出针对儿童的广告的有极大的负面影响;
 
  第3段:论证段第2段,指出有的广告也积极的一面;
 
  第4段:总结段,给出结论。
 
  参考范文:
 
  Children are not only the precious stones of a country or a family, but also the targeting resources of the commercial world. As a result, enormous advertisements, like the goods for entertaining or eating, have been created to catch the eyeballs of these very young kids, which arouses parents’ huge worries.
 
  I can entirely understand their concern. In plain sight, these very young kids are too naive to distinguish what things are really necessary. When they are bombarded with fascinated commercial advertisements, they are seldom able to resist the lure, thus leaving no stone unturned to force their parents to buy a toy which they may have already possessed a certain number of or some junk food. This is, indeed, a kind of pressure no matter towards children or parents, no to mention that many advertisers probably exaggerate and beautify their products, misleading the target audience, especially making mothers get so irritated when they have bought some milk or toys that lack security guarantee.
 
  Nevertheless, scarcely can we deny that the overloaded information in the modern era makes it much more difficult for people to select the piece of information they really need, so advertising is necessary for them to acquire some knowledge about various products and choose the right one which can cater the requirements of consumers. It can be seen that there are also many advertisements that showcase the well-rounded information for customers, but, in reality, more advertisers over-emphasize their goods in order to increase the sales volume.
 
  Overall, from where I stand, I would say that advertising is indispensable in the commercialized world for the sake of inform, but all the advertisements, in particular those aiming at those who are in a very young age, must be carefully censored before they are launched.
 
  重要写作词组学习:
 
  1. commercial 商业的
 
  2. arouse one’s huge worries 引起某人的巨大担忧
 
  3. in plain sight 显而易见地
 
  4. be bombarded with 充斥着
 
  5. lure 诱惑;诱饵
 
  6. leave no stone unturned 千方百计;想尽办法
 
  7. no to mention 更不用说
 
  8. exaggerate 夸张;夸大
 
  9. target audience 目标观众
 
  10. scarcely can we deny…倒装句
 
  11. cater the requirements of consumers 迎合消费者需求
 
  12. showcase 展示
 
  13. well-rounded 全面的
 
  14. over-emphasize 过度强调
 
  15. launch 投放市场
 
  2016.07.14雅思写作第一时间解析+范文
 
  大作文原题目:
 
  People today still value artists(such as musicians, painters and writers)at the age of science and technology.
 
  Why is that?
 
  Are the arts as important as science and technology to people's lives?
 
  题目译文:
 
  在当今的科学技术时代,人们仍然重视如音乐家、画家和作家这样的艺术家。
 
  为什么?
 
  对人们的生活来说,艺术是和科学技术同等重要吗?
 
  话题频率:
 
  2016年第一次
 
  思路拓展:
 
  艺术类素材可以串用。
 
  观点:人们追求高品质生活是主要原因,而且艺术也是同等重要的
 
  生活在现代化的状态下,人们容易厌倦高压且快节奏的生活并且想释放压力。当人们工作一周后,会经常去剧院等场所娱乐,放松自己暂时忘掉现实世界的事情。虽然里能够娱乐自己。虽然现代科技使得生活更加方便和高效,但很多人感觉空虚和孤独,他们只在乎物质的东西。艺术使人们能够反思生活的意义,树立正确的生活态度等等。
 
  除此之外,像歌剧这样的艺术 往往提炼于生活,富含知识和历史。孩子们学习他们可以更聪明 培养想象力 丰富知识结构 培养审美能力等等。比如会弹吉他的孩子,手脑协调 利于成长。
 
  范文参考:
 
  At the age of scientific technology,artists are still valued and respected by people.This is especially evident in developed countries and big cities.In my opinion,the desire of life with high quality should be responsible for this phenomenon and arts should be regarded as the same important as science and technology.
 
  When people live in the modern society,they may easily get sick of fast-paced life and have desire for relief of the stress.After a day’s hard work,they want to go to the concert hall,gallery or theater,where they can entertain themselves and forget their business in real world temporarily.Although modern technologies make life more convenient and efficient,many people feel empty or isolated and they only care about material things.Arts enable them to reflect on the true meaning of life and develop a positive attitude towards life.Some artistic works are inspirational and provide people with new ideas which they can draw on in their work.
 
  Besides,ancient and foreign artists has created a large number of artistic works such as operas,paintings and sculptures ,which give us knowledge about the history and culture.People,particularly children,learn to appreciate the beauty of nature and life through artistic works.When children are surrounded by various electronic products today,exposure to excellent artistic works is particularly important.Aesthetic education is an essential part of children’s growth.It helps to develop their intelligence,imagination and creativity.For instance,children who learn to play the guitar can develop the ability to coordinate their left and right brain and become cleverer.
 
  In conclusion, although advanced technology makes it easier and more convenient for people to live modern life,arts is an indispensable part of people’s daily life and also important.
 
  2016.07.16雅思写作第一时间解析+范文
 
  大作文原题目:
 
  Some people think that instead of preventing climate change,we need to find a way to live with it.
 
  Do you agree or disagree?.
 
  题目译文:
 
  一些人认为我们需要找到一个方法来容忍气候变化,而不是防止他。
 
  你是否同意。
 
  话题类型:
 
  环保类
 
  话题频率:
 
  2016年第一次
 
  题目分析:
 
  题是新题,但是素材都是一样的
 
  类似题目:
 
  2014.6.28(环境话题)
 
  With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places.
 
  Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?
 
  思路拓展:
 
  承认:预防环境变化确实难:
 
  1.单个的国家和人民在有巨大破坏力和易变的环境变化下 显得无助和渺小
 
  2.各个国家间的经历政策和利益难以平衡 合作难
 
  但是:确实难,但是并不意味着就live with it,因为它危及到人们的生存
 
  1. 非发达地区加强法律约束,惩治和预防哪些违法的经济活动,因为这些地区经常以破坏环境为代价来发展经济 消耗大量fuels 排放未经处理的废水废气,而且是导致环境变化和环境恶劣的主要区域。
 
  2. 建立强有力的国际组织,监督和支持成员国,国家之间通力合作,尤其建议发达国家输出资金和技术去帮助落后国家
 
  范文参考:
 
  It has been suggested that people have to live with changeable climates rather than preventing it. However, most countries have taken measures or negotiated with other countries to combat climate changes. In my  opinion, how to prevent this situation from being worse should on the top agenda as humans’ existence is being threatened.
 
  Admittedly,there are difficulties in stopping climate from harming people’s living. Because climate spreads its influence around the earth and the damage it brings is unstoppable ,sudden and damaging, this makes it rather tough for individual country and individual people to keep themselves away from such damage like floods ,drought and sudden heavy rainfall. Besides, cooperating with other nations has yet to be achieved. It is unlikely for every country to put its budgets on environmental protection and reduce greenhouse gases-emissions by slowing down its economic development as every one has different public money and economic policies .
 
  However, although dealing with this problem is difficult to achieve,but it does mean we have to stand it and do nothing. It is strongly suggested that governments in underdeveloped countries should enforce strict laws on environment as these countries always put economic development at the cost of destroying the nature like consuming large amount of fuels and release them without limits. According to these laws, illegal activities will be punished and potential ones will be deterred. As a result, greenhouses gases like carbon dioxide will be cut down and prevent global warming.
 
  In addition, it is still necessary to make all countries join forces and make concerted efforts. To make this cooperation effectively, there should be an united organization to supervise and support its members. If those countries which have advanced technological equipments to develop economy environmentally export these technology to undeveloped ones, there is no doubt that the damaged environment will be improved fast.
 
  In conclusion, although it seems that the climate changes are inevitable and unlikely to be prevented easily. However, only when we are truly willing to collaborate with others and make all efforts,the problem would be solved.
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